I have edited and sold over 70 books to market in my first four years as a literary agent. Part of my process and letter will be to help you understand the marketability of your manuscript. I would love to help you land your dream agent and have a great MS ready!


pam.vhv@gmail.com to reserve your spot today!

Full developmental edit of up to 100,000 words: $500 over 100,000 $700
Full edits receive a marked-up copy of MS with a full developmental letter and a phone call to clarify if needed.

Picture book edit: $250
Line edited and developmental letter.

Query readiness package: $100
A full edit of your query and first chapter.

Paypal transactions are accepted for payment.
One month turnaround. 
Space is very limited. Book early.
By choosing to edit you cannot query me and I cannot represent your work.

No refunds for missing the time slot purchased.


I highly recommend Pam's editing services. She gave me high-level insight into the core of the story, the pacing, and the characterization, yet also managed to provide specific edits in a short period of time. She knows the industry, knows the editors, and can steer you toward whatever your publication goals may be. All of that, delivered in a supportive and affirming package! What are you waiting for? - Inara Scott RITA Finalist